- background image could be a little more crisp for big screens and retina
- white text at the bottom doesn't indicate what is clickable and the "Site Design © 2016 Jabari Holloway" is much to prominent for something that adds little value to the site
- blue buttons look very bootstrappy, I'd use the outline versions (there is a button-outline for bootstrap, no?) to keep the weightless look fitting the theme of the site.
- some subtle shadow on the floating text in the color for the "black" in the picture would add readability, fading away really close stars (just 1-2px at 50% opacity can to wonders and is hardly noticeable as a shadow)
- the about screen needs a big button for [come on in and have a look], the close button is counter-intuitive and hard to find here.
- the reddish text in the about me looks a bit off, I'd stick to black, white and your highlight color blue
- I'm personally not a big fan of half-transparent backgrounds.
- I like the paging on the stories, but once you scroll the back button is gone, it should be always visible
- I would consider always showing all menu points, make achievements and stories visually different, but keep them on screen.
- I like animations to be very quick, so I don't have to wait for them to "use" the site. The growing glow to make the text readable is much too slow for my taste. Maybe use "ease-out" to quickly grow to size and still have a smooth stop.
- a fancy suggestion: show all achievements and stories, but connect each group like star constellation and have "Stories" and "Achievements" as the constellations names ( http://www.physics.unlv.edu/~jeffery/astro/constellation/con... )
- when scrolling down on stories, the bottom menu moves up the page, guess that's not supposed to happen.