One minor point is that you don't mention some fundamentals of the machine learning process, like making sure to evaluate your models on a different data set than you used to train your models.

Another point is that this article is really about how to learn deep learning, not how to get a job. I would really like to see some evidence that: "The good news is that basically everyone is hiring people that understand deep learning." Most data scientist jobs I have seen don't require or use deep learning.