I wonder why it was flagged? I can't understand how it's off topic?
I am pretty interested in making a better job selling myself. When I go reading articles like yours, what I look for specifically is the rationale of why people use this or that expression.
Have in mind this is an intuitive impression and I am not gonna break your article on small pieces and discuss all of them. I am only sharing a quick emotional response on how I felt after reading your article.