Your words like "targeted" sound like a pure spam to me. If you are genuinely helping people, "targeted" has no place, unless you are creating a marketing spam!
Well, I may not have given thoughts on that stand enough to have lost focus. I will definitely re think the entire approach for here, thanks for the valuable feedback.
The description is hard to parse, but I agree it doesn't seem focused on solving a problem or creating value for users. Rather to build an audience or page views for <something>.
I think I need to work more on how can I make the description more convincing so that it can convey the true intentions behind the business model. Thanks for the help.