Tuvi.io

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Hello, I would like you guys give me some feedback about a project I'm working on. I wil no explain what the Tuvi does in order to validate the effectiveness of my landing. Let me know: 1. If you get what Tuvi does 2. What do you think? 3. What potential problems you see 4. Some improvements or things I should take into consideration before launching.

The link is https://tuvi.io

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(I suck at this so take with a grain of salt and it's only my opinion) Off the top of my head:

1) Yes, but had to read the whole page to really grasp the concept.

2) It's fine as far as it goes, but nothing that Quora, Reddit and/or Stackoverflow don't already provide in someway.

3) Changes I'd make: - "Start making better (smarter?) decisions" should be the tag line. - The Picture and the copy beside it should be the hero section. - Nobody cares about features, they care about benefits so drop this for now or rewrite to show why they might matter to the reader. - "What makes us special" is probably not needed. - At this stage, you probably just need a hero section and lead capture form.

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