Looks good. The writing is bad though. Sorry. Why are there links to hardware/software on top of the page? Get a dedicated domain for this product, don't make it one of 100 services that you offer (or nobody will want it). Also, make sure to get a tour and stuff apart from the video.
In short: this needs a lot of work to stand out in a crowd of 100s of online project management tools.
Mindstream is a project I've been working on [alone] for a few months. I'd like co-founders, but can' afford it without funding / customers. Let me know how I could improve and what I can do better