You're comparing the courses you're offering to a Lamborghini? Cool, but I don't see why I should place as much value in your product. In fact, you might simply be going for a Veblen goods effect, just like the Lamborghini.

That's only one part of the problem in your essay.

The other part is that it assumes that:

1) every student in the world is in the US and

2) every student in the world is poor entirely because of university fees.

Frankly, whenever someone wants to shell out money for an online course, I caution them. There are tons of free resources out there, some legal, and some not, but all provide quality education.