I agree with all the points you have presented, in that they seem to make sense to me.
Something you said stuck out to me though (triple asterisks around the word I want to put emphasis around):
> ...are using their own theories of mind and inference ability to read more into Koko's actions than what is really there.
Isn't that a judgement, that one should avoid when doing science. That is to say, the following could also be valid options, unless ruled out:
> ...something else into Koko's actions than what is really there.
> ...less into Koko's actions than what is really there.
Your thoughts?