- The first question I would have is about pricing. What's the point of a free trial (for you and your users) if they won't pay afterward?
- I would change the generic iPad home screen to one showing your app.
- Also, I was going to comment on how you had a typo, but I see that the product is name MnuBox. Not sure how I feel about that.
- I second what SHOwnsYou says, especially about creating a product tour.