$541M Dollars Printed Everyday – Where Does It Go?
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One example is this line: "Why was this all done in secret? Simply put, the American people did not want a Central Bank. In 1910, unlike today, people had a better understanding of exactly central banking was and what it tried to do."
That's a pretty strong claim that I'd love to see justified using appropriate references but, even if they exist, the author doesn't appropriate link them to their claims.
That's...a quite implausible claim, supported by no cited evidence of any kind. (And not unique in the article in that respect.)
Much of this reads like the kind of conspiracy theories goldbugs have long spread that were later adopted by the cryptocurrency community, and is not supported by the few sources you list at the end (but do not specifically cite for particular claims.)
As a piece where you're writing down what you've found out so far, it's fine.
As a piece that's intended to be genuinely informative about modern money supply, it's substantially less so.
Quickly, a couple other lines that are editorializing without adequate references:
"Inflation is the tax we all pay for the fraud of money printing."
"We currently operate under what is widely known as the debt-based monetary system, this system has a requirement that debt continues to grow. The system relies on people getting further into debt which in essence creates more money into the system."
My opinion about central banks and their background can be changed but it requires a lot more citation to justify your reasoning. This article is trying to further an agenda associated with crypto-currencies while stating opinions as fact without appropriate references.
It's not poorly written but it is poorly referenced.
I really appreciate you taking a read and providing feedback. Admittedly I am more of a tech nerd than a formal writer.
Recommendations have been noted, and I look to improve in future posts.
Assuming this is a misplaced reply to https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=18231623 —
there is more than one line of editorializing in the article; virtually every sentence in the article contains either editorializing or fact claims that don't seem grounded in the few cited sources, and some contain both.