I've suffered through this ever waiting for it to engage with any of the arguments from MIRI, Bostrom and co. yet it only managed to paint a few strange windmills for itself to charge at.
So it talks about Singularists, and how misguided they are, and how AI is a misnomer and it should be called EI and namedrops cybernetics and systems and reminisces about how we lost our way.
It is a bad manifesto, a boring and toothless essay.
It has a good point, but alas I forget it as I tried to keep reading.
Anyway, let's just take this sentence: "We can measure the ability for systems to adapt creatively, as well as their resilience and their ability to use resources in an interesting way." - This is so broad and universal, that it's either meaningless or false. And there is absolutely no argument supporting this. I highlighted this, because this is what directly contradicts the alarmist thinking. If we were able to measure creativity and resilience in general, we could train AIs to get a higher creativity score, furthermore, we could then control them.
And it's also interesting that this claim goes counter to a claim a bit earlier about how unknowable and messy things are going to be.
It also somehow picks corporations as the perfect model for a superintelligence, which is convenient, but by doing so sidesteps all the real arguments about how a self-perfecting machine superintelligence is not bound by slow components. And somehow also ignores the reality of Samsung, AIG, MicroSoft, Oracle, Shell, BP and how all got away with almost everything. (And other companies that are quite successful, despite competition. And how much we have to work to keep them sort of aligned to our laws and goals.)
The best argument against a hard take off is that it's hard to imagine that so many S-curves can be combed through in so little time with the real world resource constraints. However Yudkowsky did an analysis of that: https://intelligence.org/files/IEM.pdf and sure, it's just a step toward more questions, more hard to imagine things, but not something that should be dismissed just because our mind throws up its hands and says "i don't see how, it's very complex, so unlikely, let's go shopping".
And this essay is exactly that. It goes on and on about those blind Singularists, and completley misses the point.