Show, Don't Tell
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The only trouble he had was when the application was bounced as being too large for the funding requested :)
We get that quite frequently, so we just keep codin'.
Of course, in creative writing it's a bit harder, since there are some very good ways of showing people things that have become deeply cliched, and it's considered improper to use those techniques. That's not the case online, unless you consider glossy buttons and rounded edges to be a cliche, which is entirely possible.
2. Show them.
3. Tell them what you just showed them.
_Tao Te Ching_
Also, The Darjeeling Limited does a great job of showing instead of telling. And 2001: A Space Odyssey.