Otherwise please use the original title, unless it is misleading or linkbait; don't editorialize.
The paragraph before the one you quote: "If the original title begins with a [...] gratuitous adjective, we'd appreciate it if you'd crop it"
But the original title doesn't begin with one, unless you count "all-new" as a gratuitous adjective.
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