The story behind it, I was homeless and now I build online businesses so I can travel the world and hopefully achieve financial freedom before 30
This is nice, but nobody is going to buy a product because of your story and ambition. People make purchasing decisions based on value.
I agree, I am not mentioning anything about my story in the website so I am only selling the value of the product, maybe it's not clearly explained, I didn't spend too much time on copy..