Nice! However, your last sentence contains "x" which was supposed to be removed from the alphabet in Year 1.
"By year 15 or so, it would finally be possible to make use of the redundant leters "c", "y", and "x" -- by now just a memory in the minds of old dodderers -- to replace "ch", "sh", and "th" respectively."
So "x" is removed as redundant, and then reintroduced for "th".