1) Extrapolating from the infection rates of very specific groups (for example, evacuees) to the entire population without taking into account transmission dynamics and the time between infection and detection does not make very much sense. The authors naively multiply the infection rate among evacuees by the population of Wuhan to conclude that Wuhan must have had 178,000 infections at the end of January. By comparison, epidemiological models have estimated there were around ~20,000 infections at that time [1][2][3]. What conclusion should we draw here? If you use sloppy, back of the napkin math to over-inflate the infection count by 10x then you can correspondingly deflate the mortality rate?
2) Speculating about the mortality rate of Covid-19 based on several gigantic assumptions ("If our surmise of six million cases is accurate, that’s a mortality rate of 0.01%") seems borderline irresponsible. Numerous researchers have been modeling this virus and have generally arrived at numbers in the range of 0.5% to 1.6% [4][5][6][7][8][9]. The authors don't present any compelling reason why we should doubt those numbers.
3) Ultimately the mortality rate is not as important a number as the hospitalization rate. The authors would have you believe this virus is no worse than the flu, but this is not congruent with the number of reports coming out of places like Italy and New York saying they're about to run out of ICU beds, or China rushing to build temporary hospitals to house all of the patients that need critical care. What the mortality rate might be under ideal circumstances where every patient receives adequate medical care might be significantly different compared to a scenario where you've run out of ICU beds and have to start rationing ventilators.
[1] https://www.mdpi.com/2077-0383/9/2/419/htm
[2] https://www.medrxiv.org/content/10.1101/2020.01.23.20018549v...
[3] https://www.mdpi.com/2077-0383/9/2/523/htm
[4] https://www.imperial.ac.uk/media/imperial-college/medicine/s...
[5] https://institutefordiseasemodeling.github.io/nCoV-public/an...
[6] https://cmmid.github.io/topics/covid19/severity/diamond_crui...
[7] https://www.medrxiv.org/content/10.1101/2020.03.04.20031104v...
[8] https://www.medrxiv.org/content/10.1101/2020.03.09.20033357v...