Some criticism if I may:
- There is no information in your post. It's basically just a timeline of events.
- You attribute part of the earnings to luck
- You extrapolate out that since you have an algorithm that is earning 2% now, that somehow it can continue for forever. .. (both you and your audience know that this is foolish thinking)
- People often are offered job positions before they are made available to the general public. I don't know that I would admit this in writing though, as this can often be illegal.
- The bolding of random words makes it difficult to read. It would be one thing if you were trying to draw attention or emphasize something but the bolded words seem to be chosen at random.
I'm not trying to come down on you, just offering my thoughts.
Good luck on your journey and I hope you do well, and I would be interested in reading more.