Try to describe the value and differentiation of your service in 1 sentence.
Don't add game mechanics, upvoting and the kitchen sink unless it is part of the core value/differentiation.
The competitive advantage matrix you have at the end shows how unfocused you are: your competitor have few features, and you have checkboxes against ALL features.
More features isn't good.
More features is bad. It's less focused. You'll do them worse.