It's a fantastic idea, but the landing page is more complicated than it needs to be.

I suggest embedding a demo video of someone using the product. A 30-45 second video ideally.

Make the page about the product, being as upfront as possible. This is the product, this is what it does, this is how you can access it.

For example, the way Apple does it: https://www.apple.com/iphone-12/ ... First thing you see is the product itself... then what it does, then how you can buy it (Apple used to be better at making these pages btw).