pattern 2: having inconsistent expectations of the reader’s knowledge
pattern 3: strained analogies
pattern 4: pretty pictures on confusing explanations
pattern 5: unrealistic examples
pattern 6: jargon that doesn’t mean anything
pattern 7: missing key information
pattern 8: introducing too many concepts at a time
pattern 9: starting out abstract
pattern 10: unsupported statements
pattern 11: no examples
pattern 12: explaining the “wrong” way to do something without saying it’s wrong