While that should be done, and they are suggesting that, I feel like that's only covering section 2 at best. This doc isn't about adding other similar walls, it's reducing attack surface, limiting blast radius, and encouraging industry standards such as defense in depth, least privilege, and some elements of supply chain security. Your comment suggests you know that, but the PDF states many other things that have nothing to do with firewalls or differentiating good traffic from bad traffic.
My take on it is I see this document more as a source to point at internally at the NSA for best practices or a minimum bar to meet, not the best that the industry or the NSA has to offer. Even then, I'd assume that some organization externally will use this to say they aren't "up to the NSAs standards", and push for changes to fix their practices.
If it means that more folks learn of common practices in the industry and increase their security as a result, I'm all for folks sharing these practices, whether it's the NSA sharing it or a private organization.
[0] - https://www.ibm.com/cloud/learn/three-tier-architecture