Great comment. I would just make a minor but relevant change, everybody is responsible here.
"And creating a culture where men and women are told it’s okay not to do those things creates harm."
"And creating a culture where men and women are told it’s okay not to do those things creates harm."
Thats just nuts
Even still, this article is examining one aspect of a problem, not the whole problem. It's okay to look at problems in parts without addressing the whole.