Too many rules. Examples would work better than a list of rules.
You can't just follow a set of rules to come up with a nice logo. You kind of need to have talent and an eye for colors, typography, etc.
Nevertheless, give him credit for listing out some helpful things to keep in mind for designing things.
The one thing I would say differently is that if you really like a certain logo's style, it isn't a crime to adopt similar styles for your own. All art is influenced by others in some way, and don't stick with something that sucks merely because it's 'original'.