To me, the old cook was the hero of that song.
When suppertime came, the old cook came on deck sayin'
"Fellas, it's too rough to feed ya"
At seven PM, a main hatchway caved in, he said
"Fellas, it's been good to know ya" At seven p.m. it grew dark; it was then
Which is nicer to the crew (doesn't imply it was a mistake on their part) but doesn't really quite flow as nicely.