I like the concept.
I would work on improving the copy, especially because this is a writing-related startup.
Fewer exclamation points and fewer words will help.
I would work on improving the copy, especially because this is a writing-related startup.
Fewer exclamation points and fewer words will help.
That line is particularly appalling and represents one of the many things that is wrong with our education system. That logical progression is what encourages people to cheat (plagiarism and paying for essays count).
Maybe try something more like "Getting feedback and incorporating it into your thought and work process will help you get it right the next time for your whole life."
(Yes, many people do fine with low levels of formal education. However, many or most of them are curious, self-educated,and self educating people with good habits.)