> The average intelligent viewer will be left confused and intimidated
I’m not qualified to know if your post is better or worse than Netflix’s documentary, Bill, but this is an egregious example of a pot calling a kettle black.
I’m not qualified to know if your post is better or worse than Netflix’s documentary, Bill, but this is an egregious example of a pot calling a kettle black.
It only commits the cardinal sin of trimming it down so much that it makes sense if and only if the reader is already familiar with it, leaving other intelligent readers confused and intimidated.
The post may be confusing, but it gets its math correct. And describes the documentary getting it wrong. So the post is probably better.
C'est la vie!!