The sales pitch negates the entire write-up. The program's not even ready so you're just collecting e-mails at this point.
This is anxiety we're talking about. Offering "early bird pricing" and some "free goodies" ? What the hell.
Edit: On top of that, you aren't even a licensed professional. What happens if you come across someone who you couldn't help and then he/she offs themselves because it was too much.
At first I was dismissive of your message and I didn't see your true intention behind it. I have taken some of your feedback and made some changes to the copy. I believe emojis and some words weren't really fit...
EDIT: I also, included a disclaimer that people don't need to buy my program in order to overcome anxiety. I assumed it was clear in the article, but I guess not, so I added that too. Hope it helps :)
Thanks again, have a good one!