Yes. This was my second draft. I reviewed my first draft which became an input in my second draft which gained more clarify after reviewing the first draft.
The way people usually say it is that you revised your first draft upon reflection, because it didn't quite get across the point you wanted to make, or something to that effect. So what makes the way you state it more true than the way people typically state it?
I can switch from word generation and evaluation. I saw the score of 1st draft was below my target. And I used the insights from the eval of the 1st draft to inform the 2nd draft.