Readability aside, I found this really interesting, so thank you. Marketing copy is so hard to get right.

This was a really great read. Please do the rest tomorrow. After reading it I went and read over my message again and noticed some inconsistencies.

Also, I think it would've been better to wait until tomorrow or the day after to post this. The front page is already littered with tech crunch's noise.

The page is totally busted on iPad.