> A number is totally real if it satisfies a polynomial equation with integer coefficients that only has real roots.
Nothing wrong with that.
See: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Totally_real_number_field
Added: in fact the Quanta article gets this right. It says "A number is totally real if it satisfies a polynomial equation with integer coefficients that only has real roots." Also, Jordana Cepelowicz is a knowledgeable math writer and I believe she has a PhD in math.
For instance, 'i' is algebraic but not totally real (it isn't a real number!), since it satisfies 'x^2 + 1'.
Any popularization is inevitably going to run into some inaccuracies—or else it's just re-publishing the technical papers—but the opinions of most mathematicians I know are that, far from being garbage, Quanta's reporting is distinctly better than most.