You are asking for honest feedback, so… if you want to excite people about your work, you need to be excited yourself. To my ears you sound rather bored during the video which made me click the back-button midway. Engage!
I did the recording at midnight last night, I thought about that after. I tried to sound excited, it just came across as cheesy and put on, so I went with this approach, sorry I bored you :(