Okay, I know picking people's sentences apart has fallen out of fashion, but:
"Divergent opinions" are ... opinions. A "definitive conclusion" is ... a conclusion.
I see more examples, but I wanted to make a point: I miss the days when fewer words conveyed more meaning. From the classic https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Elements_of_Style: "Make every word count."
About brevity of expression, I must add this (possibly apocryphal) story about Ernest Hemingway. In the 1920s Hemingway and his Paris friends had a contest: who could write the shortest readable short story? Hemingway won with this entry:
For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn.