More than anything, your comment just feels like you just copy-pasted it from the blurb you send to investors? For example you say:
> ... while we can deploy any compute that our customers want, we are starting with AMD instead of Nvidia...
> One of my goals has also been to get Dell ... to offer compute credits on our cluster. ... It becomes a developer flywheel...
I mean, OK? The second part in particular ("It becomes a developer flywheel") seems totally irrelevant to anyone except a potential investor. Why would I as a customer care about your product being a flywheel??
I can hardly speak for everyone on this website, but I know I'm here first and foremost because I love to learn (c.f. "If you had to reduce it to a sentence, the answer might be: anything that gratifies one's intellectual curiosity."). Even if I were working on a startup similar to yours, your comment doesn't really teach me anything ("we're building our own first cluster of 16x Dell chassis..." OK?)
Also, quite frankly, I just went to your website and it reads like it was generated by ChatGPT.
> In essence, Hot Aisle is not merely a cloud compute provider but a dedicated partner that accelerates the journey of businesses towards HPC advancements, ensuring they navigate the digital transformation landscape with assured resource scalability, enhanced security, and unwavering support.