Did you notice we offer real-life usage scenarios at the bottom of the page?
I don't want to click through 5+ random scenarios to perhaps find one that comes close to what I have in mind.
Well, at the risk of repeating myself. You seem to be generating revenue already, so I would seriously look into hiring a designer for this (or make a contest or such).
My gut feeling is that you're so deep into all this (which is generally good!) that you have a hard time reviewing it through the eyes of a first-time visitor.