Never published an LLM text, friend.
And if somebody needs Claude to get something published, that person should find a better line of business, one more suited to her or his aptitudes.
> I would be genuinely interested in specific changes you would do if you were the editor.
This whole thing would get sent back with the kind request to think of an argument and write it out. By hand. Without an LLM.
In all fairness, I've been accused of sounding like an LLM this year, which is quite unfortunate as I think we're coming to the end of careful writing.