I would say so.
There is a lot of noun phrase usage in places where complete sentences are expected. Articles (a, an, the), transition phrases and even subjects are mostly dropped, and the sentences are too long without a break.
There is a lot of noun phrase usage in places where complete sentences are expected. Articles (a, an, the), transition phrases and even subjects are mostly dropped, and the sentences are too long without a break.
I do not spot any missing articles, and the missing subjects (as well as the debatable-to-be-missing transition phrases) too fall within the bounds of stylistic concern. Sentence length also.
Definitely not a pleasure to read mind you, but given that it wasn't meant to be read either, I'm not sure that should be surprising.