> Do I get anything out of this deal? > > This is the part I’m most excited about: I am going to invest the revenue from this deal into making more and better products.

I mean you do you but this whole line of argument just seems kinda insulting to readers? "Yeah I am planning on making even more money but it's really for your benefit"

Rather just say that you're doing it to make more money? When mcdonalds puts up their prices they say it's for shareholder profit not "we'll be using our increased profits to develop new mcNewThings"