I enjoyed yours. TBH, I feel like some small thing is still missing. It's difficult to put the finger on it. Maybe the dialogue isn't hundred percent credible? Or maybe there is something subconscious where we notice the "actors" are not fully believable. But I think you've got talent.

What struck me is that it's really close to photo realistic, but I would still have noticed it's AI by the tiniest continuity mistakes and visual cues, like slightly unnatural color grading and such. However, if I had seen this five years ago, I would have taken it to be a real recording with post processing that makes it look a bit polished, like Benjamin Button or Grand Budapest Hotel.