StoryLine is my pet project. If you have any questions I'm happy to answer them. It's still in early stages and I'm keen to hear your feedback.
For the "tutorial", I read through maybe the first 3 boxes, then got tired and clicked until I could explore it myself. I bet it's the same for most users (feel free to measure to get real data). If you can, defer teaching to mouseovers and other hints in the UI.
One quick thing I noticed is that the thumbnails show up, even if there is no article for them: http://i.imgur.com/QrLZuxF.png
You can see previous version here http://blog.storyline.im/4/post/2013/01/first-reddit-integra...