Ask HN: Rate my site - FirstDrafter community library of contract forms

It's a good idea, but how do you expect to compete with scribd/docstoc and perhaps even legalzoom?

Some things to point out:

You spend too much time on the home page explaining what your site is. To be honest, it could be done in one sentence. The buttons at the bottom right make me feel like I'm pressing 'next' or moving on to step 2 of some process. The home page, ideally, should have a one-liner of what the site does, and then perhaps some links to example contracts/forms and a search bar up top so that the user can get to accessing documents as quickly as possible. Also, I'd clean up the site design a bit. Maybe make it wider, as something about such a narrow site makes me uncomfortable. Also, you might want to look into making a logo. It's not absolutely necessary, though.

You want me, as a user, to click on FirstDrafter, and start looking for documents within seconds. Don't make me read that whole pitch.

Good luck.

Why is "about" on its own line below the "menu bar"?