This post doesn't really say much at all. I think he is leaving out a lot of information.
Edit: I left out more specifics for length reasons. May do a follow up post on more of the details.
Here are a bunch more questions just as fodder:
How much did you have to adapt your pitch based on the investor? Did you have multiple pitches, geared to things you knew about an investor going in? Or did you do more of your adaptation on the fly, based on the reaction of the investor?
How many nos did you get before a yes?
Where would you say you wasted the most time, and you would not pitch that type of angel, or not pursue that kind of introduction, etc, next time?
Thanks for the post, and looking forward to your follow up(s)!