Everything pedalpete[0] said, and a few more things. It's hard to say some of this without sounding condescending - it isn't. Please take it at face value.
You need to spell and grammar check your work. I applaud what you've done, and you've clearly worked hard in difficult circumstances and have done well. I will spell and grammar check up to 1000 words for you for free, just to help, no obligation.
I also didn't know why I should give you my email address, and I nearly just closed without looking further. I saw the "About" link only at the last moment - you need to give me more.
Good luck.