Having a 3d printer (a Makerbot), the first thing I want to see in another one is the resolution. However, in all of these pictures the printed object is out of focus or just too far to see it clearly. (Is it on purpose?)

Then I want to see the speed. A time lapse doesn't do it.

The 15 "innovations"... I would try to emphasize the 3-5 most important. The other ones are... how would I put it... this is the kind of stuff I would have put in a school work just to take up some space:

8. Bold colors. Choose from Silver, Black, Blue, RedOrange, and Green. 9. New filament materials like Chameleon PLA. 10. Inspirational Micro filament spools. -----> Inspirational? Really? 11. Modernized touch-capable software. 12. Replaceable print beds for alternative materials. 13. Replaceable nozzles for experimenters. 14. Designed for fast assembly in the US for quality control. 15. An ABS-based print bed allows you to print larger ABS parts.

Another random thought: The art team is almost as big as the dev team... wtf?