Ryel, greatly appreciate you taking the time to write that out. No way would I downvote that -- it's exactly the type of constructive criticism I was hoping for. I'm taking your feedback seriously and will use it.

I've kept the page bland because I spend more of my time on client projects than on my own site, and most projects have come in through word-of-mouth. However, I realize that's not sustainable, and I should really blog more often and work more on the personal promotion front.

Edit: Can I buy you coffee in NYC? Can't find your contact info. Mine is in my profile.