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Thank you so much for your suggestion. I've been completely focused on our business plan and learning about all the different elements that are needed to build the site. It's only been the past couple of days that I've realized that I need to start telling people about it. Hence the blog. I will look into this tomorrow. Thanks again!

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Hi,

Your story is really nice and your motivation is well stated in your blog post: "...the fragmented condition and outdated technologies of the commercial real estate industry continued to frustrate me.....I decided to find a better solution"

I feel your story stands out with that one sentence - it would have been better to lead with that. I also feel the emphasis on your age and role as a single parent takes away from your central motivation when you lead with those points.

My 0.0000424 btc! Good luck with your startup

Great suggestions. I was looking for a "hook" to stand out. This is such a great learning experience and I really appreciate the feedback.

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