Ask HN: Correct Abstract Verbalisation for Bachelor Thesis?

Hi Erik,

At a guess you've used Google translate or something similar, and although I can have a guess at most of the meanings, it's really unclear what you're trying to say. Google translate is very bad at translating long and complex sentences.

I have a suggestion. Use really, really short and simple sentences, and feed them into the Google translator. It has a much better chance of coping with simple sentences. The sentences you get out will help us to understand what you mean.

The alternative is that someone here might speak English (first) and German (second) and be able to translate the German into English for you.

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I think you've used Google translate. I can have a guess at most of the meanings. However it's really unclear. Google translate is very bad at translating long and complex sentences.

Ich glaube, Sie haben mithilfe von Google zu übersetzen. Ich kann eine Vermutung haben die meisten der Bedeutungen. Aber es ist wirklich unklar. Google zu übersetzen, ist sehr schlecht um die Übersetzung von langen und komplexen Sätze.

I have a suggestion. Use really short and simple sentences. Give them to the Google translator. It has a much better chance of coping with simple sentences. The sentences you get out will help us to understand what you mean.

Ich habe einen Vorschlag. Verwenden Sie wirklich kurze und einfache Sätze. Geben Sie ihnen zu den Google Übersetzer. Es hat eine viel bessere Chance, um in einfachen Sätzen. Die Sätze, die Sie erhalten, Sie wird uns helfen zu verstehen, was du meinst.

There is an alternative. Someone here might speak English (first) and German (second). They might be able to translate the German into English.

Es gibt eine Alternative. Jemand könnte hier sprechen Englisch (ersten) und Deutsch (Sekunden). Sie könnten allenfalls zu übersetzen dem Deutschen ins Englische.

Learning a new language is always tough.

"heads a big step"???

"selling tickets in any way"???

"create a Germany wide web portal"

"there was created a tool"

"aiming this goal"

"a good measuring"

PS: I don't think this is relevant to HN.

Hi alain,

thanks for your help. I will look to find better phrases, to replace these.

@your PS: Yes and No. I thought maybe for a week about adding this question here. In the end I decided to do it, because:

- it is about what I hack - As reviewing code sharpens your coding skills, so might reviewing foreigners English texts to sharpen your mother tounge skills. Thus, it might be to value for you. - For sure, it helps me. - It is the way of the student (and all hackers should be students their whole life). Maybe I can never give back to you, what you help me here. But I help foreigners here in Germany since 3 years to translate texts and understand my language. Viewing it from this point, I don't feel too selfish, asking here for your help.

I hope, this reasoning makes sense.

I feel your pain. I'm French (my wife is German) and I have been living in Silicon Valley for 10 years now. I am aware of language barriers.

Hi RiderOfGiraffes,

thanks for your harsh critique. No I didn't use any translater but my own mind. ;) If you still want to help me, please tell me, what exactly did you understand until now. Maybe this way I am able to see, where I have to start changing things.

best regards

ErikB PS: hehe, I can understand all of your german sentences. :) Google is much better as I thought (but yes, it sounds really like my best friend from India)

Hi Erik,

I'm not really in a position to help you just now - I'm really busy, and this will take time. However, the original comment still stands. Currently you are using long sentences designed to sound right for the context. Unfortunately, they're not quite right, and there is a lot of room for interpretation.

Your English is way, way better than my German, so I don't really have a chance to help. However, if you give a simple explanation, in English and German in parallel, and keep the sentences short and clear, perhaps someone can help you draft a complete English version.

As I say, I don't have time right now, but I think that's your best chance of getting some help. I can put you in touch with a professional German->English translator, but that would cost real money. He is extremely good, and in great demand.

No harm in asking for a quotation.

http://mussett-sprachen.de/

with guidance from HN and friends I have changed a little bit. Hope this is better (but still does not feel good enough):

"""The company ticket-web GmbH & Co. KG faces a big step in its evolution. The supplier of technical solutions for selling tickets in different kind of ways wants to create a Germany wide web portal to sell tickets of regional events. To measure and increase the success of this web portal, in this bachelor thesis an application was created. It will concentrate on increasing the coverage and conversion-rate of web users and is called ENTREE©-marketeer. Increasing the coverage of web users can be accomplished through Search Engine Optimization, information exchange with web-databases and -catalogues and integration in webcommunities. Conversion rates can be increased by adjusting the design and usability to the needs of the target audience. Aiming for higher conversion rates creates the need for extensive and detailed analysis of the users behaviour and therefore the need for a good measurement of this behaviour. How the marketeer helps ticket-web to create a successful and sustainable web business will be shown in detail in the following chapters."""