Is it necessary to write 1,400 words? It's too much to go through line for line, you're completely missing the point and I'm not spending any more time on it.
Here's a different approach. Read about the history of dishonesty[0] of the woman called the twitter mob to destroy Tim Hunt's career and just think about it for a little while. That's it, just think.
[0] - http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3141158/A-flawed-acc...