Appreciate the feedback. Could you please clarify how it isn't helping (it's too late for me to fix this submission, but it'll help me for future submissions). Thanks.
When submitting a ShowHN just leave the OP text blank, so the link follows straight to the website in question.
Put any description in a separate comment in a reply to the OP. (Also cut out that marketing-ish waffle talk, it reads sickly)