-1 karma · joined April 17, 2012
I've tried Microsoft's Expression software and feel is a viable alternative for a one-time price of $79 smackers.
If I get an itch to upgrade, it won't be to rent Adobe software.
But more on point with the post, I perceive you have three problems:
1) You don't have a simple, punchy business idea that can make a lot of money
2) The writing comes off as a bit outlandish and loquacious in this business setting. Sorry. Cut your prose down and stick with the cold facts.[1]
3) I said I had three? I lied. Yes, that's my third point: never lie.
Seriously though, I hope you address the first two issues and arrive at something you can be successful with.
[1] Then again, what do I know.
Really? Sounds odd. I can't find data to support that statement either.
Google is a habit, and not a healthy one IMO. It doesn't always produce the best search results.
By making registration as Facebook only, you may be excluding some of the best people.