More constructive criticism: your benefits seem to really be features. To convert your features to benefits, you need to talk about likely possible use cases. For example, one "benefit" that you list is "Custom notifications", but that doesn't really tell me anything - it doesn't connect to me at all. Instead if you had said "Get invoice notifications when you get to work", that would resonate with me more. You'd obviously have to tailor your benefits to your target customers.